Are you by any chance the same person that made the manhwa Paper cuts on Webtoon? Because you have basically the same art style. If so then, your an awesome story teller and you make good content.

Is it normal for me to cry and wish blanche would be my mom? 

(without the R@pe part)

because I feel like I'd rather want that love than the one im recieving rn 

if you can even call it love ;v;

ANYWAYS ENOUGH ABOUT ME LET'S MOVE ON TO THE GAME 

ABSOLOUTE 10/10 THE TRAUMA THE MUSIC THE NON- STEREOTYPICAL REPRESENTATION THAT EVERYTHING WOULD BE OK and the ART OMGGGGGG I LUVV IT AHHH!!!  Can't wait for more about this game i certinally believe this is heading in a good direction you litterally get so invested!!! I REALLY CAN'T GET ENOUGH !!!!!

Hey there! I'm a big fan of your work and as a representetive of both russian VN dev community and a VN admirer myself, I would really love to help you with the localisation. No payment whatsoever, I just really want to bring this game to a bigger audience that it deserves, and visual novels are known to be most popular in Japan and Russia  sooo.... :3

Anyway, if you would like me to help you with a high-quality translation, just contact me via discord (dobroslav_kiselev) or telegram <3<3<3

Best regards,

//Swyatobor//

Amazing.

I really don't know how to feel about this, this was unlike anything I've read!!!! But seriously, the art, the disgustingly accurate portrayal of sa, the trauma the Yul went through, just- no words. I'm excited to see what direction this vn goes in and even if I'm not a great fan of romance in general(like the overused cliche tropes, but this definitely isn't one), I feel like I want to read this further and continue to support it, if only for the horror.

I have a feeling this story is going to traumatize me, and I'M ALL HERE FOR IT-

THIS WAS AMAZING YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LIKED THIS, LOOKING FORWARD FOR MORE

I LOVE THIS ONEEE, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK DEVV

This game is awesome, the story and everything touched me. To the point I started crying a lot LMFAO, but thats how much I got emotional when his sister died. I can't wait for the rest of the game to release, keep it up! <3

holy fuck i regret not actually paying attention to warnings all that much cus that shit was FUCKING HEAVY! The dread throughout the whole prologue until *crack*, and in some sick way its all gone, things can get worse, but just how much anymore?

And then it plays that god forsaken sound effect at the end and i feel terrible that the only reason i didnt break down into giggles is because it's 3:30AM

This looks good ahhh!! Another VN to add to my never ending list of demos LOLOL ✮♡

its soo underrated! i played this and cried soo much T-T! Cant wait for the other chapters!!

me estan matando T-T necesito saber que va a pasar!!! such an incredible game i love it

Omg ım going play this game today, ı came here from webtoon when ı saw your post about this game btw ı loved paper cuts i t was such a good serie

I will not be singing you praises in this one...cuz everyone else has been doing it perfectly for me lol.

I feel like this is one of the more refreshing VNs I've seen on itch.io in a while. The writing, the artstyle, even the text effects. And as someone who dislikes text effects in my VNs/IFs, this is something.

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Also it's kinda...refreshing? unique? interesting? to have a female predator as the villain for once. And on another female too. And it's played for actual HORROR and not...something else.

I'll be real with you, I actually thought that it was a male teacher or classmate who abused the sister (vomiting cuz she's got pregnant), and then the reveal of MISS Blanche to be her abuser made me go from "oh shit" to "OH SHIIIIIITTTT".

i love you pls update x

Bro this is underrated asf, please continue making it!!!

THIS IS AMAZING (im crying while typing this) 
i want yul to get his revenge sm

THIS IS AMAZINGG IM IMMEDIATELY HOOK!! At first i was so confused about what's happening and keep playing it. The prologue is devastating. When im slowly having an idea what's actually happening, im on the edge of my seat the whole time! 

And then the ending, jaw dropped, then i quickly went back here to read the description "things take unexpected turns and he finds himself with a strange but deep connection to exactly the girl that he planned to kill." I WAS LIKE "OHMYGOD"

The art is so goood too and the effects aahhh it's been a while since i felt so excited towards a game. IM DEFINETLY GOING TO WAITTTT FOR NEXT CHAPTERSS I LOVEE YOYUUUU

The pacing of this game was amazing, it was able to make me literally CRY!!! I fell in love with the characters, and grew so attached to them in such a short amount of time. The creepy descriptions of how yul was feeling took me away, and its crazy how this demo is free!! I look forward to the future of the game AND IM SO HAPPY YOU MADE THIS CUZ WOWOWOWOW THE ART IS AMAZINNGGGG :3 FULL GAME WHEN!! 

The artwork is beautiful and the writing combined with the camera & text effects just makes experiencing chapter 0 absolutely visceral. I was so preoccupied with reading that I didn't even noticed that it was 12 pm, there was so much content. I scrolled down the comments and saw that you were the author of Paper Cuts. I "slept" and then immediately went to my phone to read the entirety of it. And when I woke up, the first thing I did was continue the damn visual novel. THAT'S HOW GOOD IT WAS! 

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The scenes where Yul was screaming along with the shaking? While I was going through the text, I swear I could heard him scream in my ears. Also the use of light and dark when Yul was covered in blood while Blanche had light surrounding her? Just a spectacular scene. Yul's feelings were described very well, your writing really drives home his 'descent' to madness (< see what I did there tehe). I felt like the slight "complaint" if you can call it that when I was reading Paper Cuts regarding Eliot and May and their backstories was answered in this demo. Yul really scratched the itch. Your choice of medium really enhanced the experience and dialed all of the charms of this story to a 10. 

    You're a fantastic chef that turned madness, love and hurt into a heart wrenching appetizer and served it. I had a taste and I can't wait for more. (although this demo was excellent by itself as well!)
      

los dibujos son hermosos, todo esta tremendo

  The drawings are beautiful, the story is spectacular, everything is very good.

throughout the game I was like this: 0 and then I was like WHATTTT IS HAPPENING, what a wonderful game, mrca esto esta buenisimo. joder revivieron las novelas visuales

This prologue was just amazing. I can't wait to see how the story progresses!

That's the craziest stuff I've read recently. You did a great job, I was honestly impressed. Hope you'll take your time and make the new chapters as good as the prologue.

OMG!!! THIS WAS SO SOSOSOSOSOSOSO GOOD!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE REST OF THE GAME TO COME OUT!!!!